Okay, so first of all, i really like your story. I like the way you are making/building it. The originality is for my part excellent. Until now, it's your own idea and it works really well, it's really really catchy. The details are good. You have enough details for my part for a comic. You really keep the idea of proportion in any way. Your technique for drawing is simple and nice. You have a nice coloring skills also. The colors are soft and it doesn't "fight" any things. One more thing, i don't loose track of the comic (day, night, afternoon, ...), you cleverly show all the time of your comic which is important in a comic. In the overwhole, your comics are clever and catchy.
One more thing to say: KEEP IT UP!!